Dane, I enjoyed your blog on the Lakers. You did have a video and a link. The layout needed a little something, maybe a picture or two of old Lakers and one of Kobe to break up the text. You could even link the pictures to something else. I'd give you a 9/10. Bill Henshaw
Dane, I enjoyed reading your blog on the Lakers too. I have to agree with the first comment made here. The layout needs to be more reader friendly. Maybe use bullet points and more pictures to emphasize your point about Kobe. 8/10
Interesting topic. I don't follow sports but I let students choose their favorite topic. A topic like this, deserves more images. you may engage your readers and encourage them to comment by asking questions making pools,...etc. I recommend that you re-read your blog and check for errors. Ali Rezaei
Dane, I enjoyed your blog on the Lakers. You did have a video and a link. The layout needed a little something, maybe a picture or two of old Lakers and one of Kobe to break up the text. You could even link the pictures to something else. I'd give you a 9/10. Bill Henshaw
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your blog on the Lakers too. I have to agree with the first comment made here. The layout needs to be more reader friendly. Maybe use bullet points and more pictures to emphasize your point about Kobe. 8/10
Interesting topic. I don't follow sports but I let students choose their favorite topic. A topic like this, deserves more images. you may engage your readers and encourage them to comment by asking questions making pools,...etc.
ReplyDeleteI recommend that you re-read your blog and check for errors.
Ali Rezaei